In Class Writing #9 Schermerhorn

     The audience of this article would be toward people who are probably a little older not teens mostly beacuse it refers to issues that mostly adults would be concerned with. Teenagers dont usually have grocery cards or read CSO. This article is responding to the issue of privacy with regards to buisnesses and consumers, with commercial transactions and cyberspace cookie-tracking. He uses CSO magazine and also that government records can be found online along with SEC violations. He uses CSO to support his claim with agreeing and using quotes from it and also uses the online records to support his claim. He uses logos alot along with pathos. When he talkes about using a dead persons grocery card this makes you feel almost discusted with those ways. He uses logos when giving hard facts about whats posted on line and how, making the reader come to the logical agreement of his argument. I would not use this article to back up my argument, although he uses a few sources it is too one-sided. His opinion is too blunt not having any understanding for the other side of the argument.